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帮我看看我这篇短文有没有语法错误 。。。
I like the pig very much,so you also can call me young pig. But you must speak it in English. I like smile,because my name called smile.I think smile may make everything going well.I like listening to the music yoo.I like sing but not good at it. And I don't have enough confident to sing a song in front of classmates.

,1so you also can call me little pig
2 But you must speak it in English.太生硬了 改成 IF YOU CALL ME LITTLE PIG I WOULD BE VERY HAPPY
3 I like smile,because my name called smile错
I like smile,because my chinese name had the same meaning as smiling对
4I think smile may make everything goes well
5I like listening to the music yoo.I like sing but not good at it. And I don't have enough confident to sing a song in front of classmates.要一致呀5I like listening to the music too.I like singing but not good at it. And I don't have enough confident to sing a song in front of classmates